Dr.jakeyuan110
12th January 2008 - 05:58 AM

my second sig
GhoztlyEpic
12th January 2008 - 04:35 PM
pretty good but for the effects you want it to flow the same way so it has a nice clean sleek look and add some lighting but overall id give it a 7/10 keep up the good work
Dr.onyx
12th January 2008 - 07:49 PM
great looking sig for a beginner the ghost render in the bg disturbes the flow anf great advice from ghoztlyepic
Dr.fusion
12th January 2008 - 07:58 PM
What you have is a sig with to directions because of the render, the hair on the girl moves to the left and the sword points to the right, if they are part of the same render well done for trying it if not and they are 2 diff renders, try to pick ones that flow the same or even flip the render.
Like ghost said work on the lighting and bring in some shadow
keep em coming though cus this is a good sig especially for a second one
Dr.jakeyuan110
12th January 2008 - 09:26 PM
http://www.planetrenders.net/renders/displ....php?pos=-10661this is the original render

is just one render
great advises thank u all