Dr.jamer
17th March 2008 - 05:46 PM
Its about time some more LP's were posted here

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Its a good concept you have, although theres a few things i would change:
the main thing is how the top of her head just kinda vanishes and gets cut off. Try to fade it out.
text needs some work, try not to box it, it makes it stand out quite a lot.
Try putting a photo filter or a gradient over her face, so it maktches one of the colours in the rest of the LP, or even use the HUe/Saturation option to change the layer with her face, I think that would make a huge diffenence.
Keep at it though, its got huge potential.
I love the blending and C4D at the bottom.
EDIT: Sorry if all that sounded harsh, it wasnt meant to at all. Im just picking out a few things i would change personally. I spend more time on LP's than sigs, so i think im a bit better at giving them CnC. It not very often an LP is posted here, so im just trying to give you some decent feedback.