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DaPinkOne
this took way too long to do for me normally would of ended up in the bin but after alot of walking away from it lol i finally finished it

its for a comp im in

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Dr.fusion
liknin it v nice blend really well tbh tho i think it needs some of the c4d clours to reflect in her face but hey thats only minor
Dr.jamer
Its about time some more LP's were posted here emo-emo-smile.png.
Its a good concept you have, although theres a few things i would change:
the main thing is how the top of her head just kinda vanishes and gets cut off. Try to fade it out.
text needs some work, try not to box it, it makes it stand out quite a lot.
Try putting a photo filter or a gradient over her face, so it maktches one of the colours in the rest of the LP, or even use the HUe/Saturation option to change the layer with her face, I think that would make a huge diffenence.

Keep at it though, its got huge potential.
I love the blending and C4D at the bottom.

EDIT: Sorry if all that sounded harsh, it wasnt meant to at all. Im just picking out a few things i would change personally. I spend more time on LP's than sigs, so i think im a bit better at giving them CnC. It not very often an LP is posted here, so im just trying to give you some decent feedback.
Dr.28forth
the only thing i dont like is the text
the rest is very well done & nice colors
DaPinkOne
thanks for the cnc emo-emo-smile.png
elajes
wow i like the color combination biggrin.gif
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